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Mini_Blood / Lady Grim asked:
Hurt______
She fell to the ground
Her heart not beating
Her lungs not breathing
She lay there without a sound

Hair so black and wet
Resting as a black puddle would
Telling of an end to a tail
So long without a fail

Visions of loveliness
Have faded away
A body without soul
Has only time to repay

Reflecting off the water
A single candles light
Promising what time can do
Over the cores of many lonely nights

She has a beauty that might have been
If only she could wakeup
Would she do it differently?
If she could do it all again

But time has come to collect
So I guess well never know
If she could do it all again
Would she look at the meaning?
The second time below

For you see
There’s more to life then meets the eye
That’s one thing she missed
One thing
Then one thousand
Were lost in the mist

Though she herself is gone
Through her life a lesson can be thought
That the things that really matter
Are easily forgot


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Comments ( 1 Comment )

Very nice…. U got talent…..
If i may add a smal suggestion…. If I were u…. I would change the last vers and replace it with this one: “Are so easily lost” …. It make the ending more deep…
Any way…. a very good poem… Keep up the good work! :)

Darckrider added these pithy words on Sep 08 09 at 2:49 pm

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